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Comfort You

Post  durrtaco on Wed Oct 28, 2009 11:23 pm

You say you're sad and dont know what to do,
Though im here and I wanna comfort you
Will it ever stop will it go away?
I dont know but I am here to stay.

You shouldnt bother on what other people say
They are lucky just to see you and even look at you
When you're down you can just look up and the sky will still be blue
Dont worry after night there will always be day


=== CHORUS ===
In darkness light will shine
It will all be fine
Dont care about what others say
In the end they will all see,
that your beauty is as brilliant as can be.
=== CHORUS ===

All you can think, all you can say.
But I'm here to comfort you in your disarray.
Why does it matter to you what they say?
Just look into my eyes and listen carefully:

=== CHORUS ===
In darkness light will shine
It will all be fine
Dont care about what others say
In the end they will all see,
that your beauty is as brilliant as can be.
=== CHORUS ===

You are so defenseless,
and they are all heartless.
Look at me, why can't you see?
The words I speak won't bring you into misery.

All these people are just blank faces in the crowd,
Why do they speak to you so loud?
Their words shake you to the core,
I'll say these words once more.

=== CHORUS ===
In darkness light will shine
It will all be fine
Dont care about what others say
In the end they will all see,
that your beauty is as brilliant as can be.
=== CHORUS ===
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Aha!

Post  Journey Lynn on Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:45 am

And finally the ray of sunshine comes through! (I was so happy to see that, not in terms of that equaling an improvement in writing, but rather as it being a step towards healing).

Though I must notice that the first of your work to display some hope and optimism is directed at comforting someone else... X3
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Re: Comfort You

Post  durrtaco on Thu Oct 29, 2009 1:05 pm

Journey Lynn wrote:And finally the ray of sunshine comes through! (I was so happy to see that, not in terms of that equaling an improvement in writing, but rather as it being a step towards healing).

Though I must notice that the first of your work to display some hope and optimism is directed at comforting someone else... X3

Haha actually I only wrote this for my friend to give to his GF...xP He asked me to write it so I did. He told me what was going on, and i started to work on this..^^ This is an old piece, btw.
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