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god particle.

Post  qwuimp on Fri Oct 30, 2009 10:12 pm



God particle. by Craig Walker

  As sandra and frank sat staring at the computer screen waiting for the result, the feeling of anticipation was overwhelming. They were on the verge of discovering the very elemant the universe was made of. they had just started an analysis of the "god particle", that elusive particle that makes up everything. 'bleep, bleep' the noise they had been waiting for, this was it the moment the secrets of the universe would be discovered. "that can't be right" was the unanticipated response from both sandra and frank simultaneously. This respnse came from the fact that the analysis had reveiled that the universe was made of nothing theoretically did not exist. As this new found knowledge began to sink into the minds of the two scientists, they began to realise the implications of this and as they realised that the universe did not exist, the universe itself realised it did not exist and blinked out of existance.

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Good job. ^^

Post  durrtaco on Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:08 pm

First of all, Welcome =D

I like the concept you have, it really makes you think about some things. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff! ^^
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Post  Nessarie on Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:34 pm

Wow, this is great! Your grammar could use some work, but overall, this is a great idea! Thank for posting it for us!

~Ness
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cheers for the kind words.

Post  qwuimp on Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:51 pm

cheers for the comments there appreciated. afro

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Post  Journey Lynn on Sun Feb 21, 2010 6:07 pm

I think this is my favorite of the pieces you've posted so far. It seems the most complete, to me, short as it is. It's a striking challenge to the practically universally accepted, "I think therefore I am"; that is to say, just because we perceive things, does that really mean we exist?

Awesome, and thanks for sharing with us here at Annabel Lee. flower
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