A Haunting Sound
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A Haunting Sound
As Dean sat alone in his room staring at the static screen, the haunting images became more real. The images of torture and rape running through his mind, projected themselves onto the screen and as the dots danced around, turning into abusive figures and human demon's, he took the pistol, placed the chamber against his forehead and pulled the trigger. The fragments of skull, now embedded into the wallpaper, would forever haunt his mother Susan.
2 years on.
As Susan sat in her room alone, staring at the static screen, the haunting images became more real. The images of flesh and skull, running through her mind, projected themselves onto the screen and as the dots danced around, turning into blood and grey matter, she took the pistol, placed the chamber against her forehead and pulled the trigger. The sound of the gunshot would forever haunt her daughter Katie.
Re: A Haunting Sound
Nahh. I think it's fine, you get the point across and you can tell there is going to be repeating, and it leaves you to thinking about how it will affect every person. Really great job ^_^
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