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Post  qwuimp Wed Nov 11, 2009 3:01 pm

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As Dean sat alone in his room staring at the static screen, the haunting images became more real. The images of torture and rape running through his mind, projected themselves onto the screen and as the dots danced around, turning into abusive figures and human demon's, he took the pistol, placed the chamber against his forehead and pulled the trigger. The fragments of skull, now embedded into the wallpaper, would forever haunt his mother Susan.

2 years on.

As Susan sat in her room alone, staring at the static screen, the haunting images became more real. The images of flesh and skull, running through her mind, projected themselves onto the screen and as the dots danced around, turning into blood and grey matter, she took the pistol, placed the chamber against her forehead and pulled the trigger. The sound of the gunshot would forever haunt her daughter Katie.

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Post  durrtaco Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:47 pm

Wow...So deep. I really like this. ^^
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Post  qwuimp Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:54 pm

cheers man, was kinda worried it might have been TOO short. afro

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Post  durrtaco Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:47 am

Nahh. I think it's fine, you get the point across and you can tell there is going to be repeating, and it leaves you to thinking about how it will affect every person. Really great job ^_^
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